I like the second one a lot more. I think it goes with you DP so far a lot better. Maybe in the foreground make some stronger darks because value wise I think its only 1-5 out of 10. But I wouldn't make it as drastic as in the first one. I'd keep everything and just add a dark in folds, wrinkles and immediate shadows. Maybe since all the colors are pretty cool make the deepest shadow a slightly warmer tone.
Do you really have a pet snail? If so, do you feed it leaves? If so, do you have a plant to supply leaves during the winter? Just wondering.
I like the idea of combining the two, the strong warm values of the top one with the sweet, cooler tones of the background on the second. I guess, literally cut and paste these two sections together if you can and see which looks better.
Here's some feeble attempts at color mock ups for my latest degree project piece. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
I like the second one a lot more. I think it goes with you DP so far a lot better. Maybe in the foreground make some stronger darks because value wise I think its only 1-5 out of 10. But I wouldn't make it as drastic as in the first one. I'd keep everything and just add a dark in folds, wrinkles and immediate shadows. Maybe since all the colors are pretty cool make the deepest shadow a slightly warmer tone.
ReplyDeleteDo you really have a pet snail? If so, do you feed it leaves? If so, do you have a plant to supply leaves during the winter? Just wondering.
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ReplyDeleteI like the idea of combining the two, the strong warm values of the top one with the sweet, cooler tones of the background on the second. I guess, literally cut and paste these two sections together if you can and see which looks better.
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